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Friday, May 6, 2016

Battle of the Kruger park


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The herd of buffalo's are walking by the river bank.
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The pride of lion are relaxing.
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The lions are getting to pounce on the buffalo's.
The pride of lions have pounced they are after the buffalo's.
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The pride of lions have pounced they are after the buffalo's.
The lions have caught the buffalo calf.
The 2 big buffalo's went to get a herd of buffalo's.
The calf has been rescued.
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The buffaloes are chasing away the lions.

3 comments:

  1. Hi kaydin I like your story and it looks nice. I can read this and imagine this in my head. I like your story.

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  2. Hello Kaydin, I'm in the Mamamku hub at Greymain school. I love the story that you have made up, you must have a great imagination. I also love the slide that you have created. I love the Battle of the Kruger park and I love the piece of Writing that you done as well. This reminds me of Matariki 2016. Great job Kaydin from Caitlyn.

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  3. Hello Kaydin, I'm in the Mamamku hub at Greymain school. I love the story that you have made up, you must have a great imagination. I also love the slide that you have created. I love the Battle of the Kruger park and I love the piece of Writing that you done as well. This reminds me of Matariki 2016. Great job Kaydin from Caitlyn.

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